…dang i didn’t see the double layer on first read but your night into the big black back home was there all along…some hidden menace looming but never actualizing and in the end not real at all…EXCEPT there it is on the side of the road left for someone else’s imagination to maybe even be their big black…
I really enjoy reading about your adventures while you were at UC. I sincerely hope your children will tell you stories about things/events you didn’t know (many years after the fact, of course).
This post was fun to read and very well written. You should have kept the sword!
…dang i didn’t see the double layer on first read but your night into the big black back home was there all along…some hidden menace looming but never actualizing and in the end not real at all…EXCEPT there it is on the side of the road left for someone else’s imagination to maybe even be their big black…
I'm not sure it was there in the first draft... this went through a bunch of iterations trying to tie things together somehow a little
I really enjoy reading about your adventures while you were at UC. I sincerely hope your children will tell you stories about things/events you didn’t know (many years after the fact, of course).
This post was fun to read and very well written. You should have kept the sword!
Yeah mom would have loved it if I came home with a sword